Caving Experience.

Icy fingers gripped my arms as I fell into the freezing water of darkness. Wandering through the cave it felt like someone was watching me. The eyes in the painting followed me down the cave I had left my mum with such anxiousness. Suddenly a shrill cry echoed in the mist.


(Wakes up from dream)(Gasps) jumps out of bed- Daniel “ ok it’s just a dream whoo” Mum “ Wake up Daniel it’s time to go caving, it’s Saturday”- Mom shouted “ yes mum” with exhaustion Daniel replied.


Then off he went cleaning his room, getting his stuff done for his big day.


After Daniel had done everything that needed to be he quickly rushed down the stairs and with sadness he said to his mum “Do we have to go” “yes it’s a family tradition trust me you can do it” mum replied.

30 min later they had everything ready to go. They jumped in the car driving towards Waitomo for their amazing trip. As they had arrived at waitomo Daniel had been surprised to see how beautiful it could be until… he reached his NIGHTMARE The CAVE.



“AHHHHHHH” Daniel screamed. He screamed for sooooo long. He ran back to the car, he didn't even last 10 seconds. After he had taken it slow he slowly over comed his fear by his mum showing him how fun caving really is. Then his fear began to vanish and he started to realize it wasn’t.





They went tubing across the river way and down to see the waterfall. He had seen so many beautiful creatures like deer, squirrels and many more. They have had so much fun they gone with such gladness and on with their day until the end.