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Friday, 17 April 2020

The REAL story of Little Red Ridding Hood. My own story:


Once upon a time there was a lovely little girl called little Red Riding Hood but she is more preferRed . She was just a girl with the beautifulest imagination. She was brought up from the wonderful woods called Evandale. The sad thing is she was raised without a mother or father and she was taken care of by her generous grandmother Hasel. She has been looking after her for most of her life. But she never regretted the responsibility of her own granddaughter.

Anyways they lived in a rather small house out in the open underneath the bright sun.

(Ding ding ding ding) loud went the alarm clock

(woosh) went Red she took hold of the alarm clock and gently turned it off. Then shouted grandma “ honey time to wake up” “ok grandma” Red Replied. She ran downstairs and got ready to eat her break fest. She had chicken soup with veggies and a warm touch to make it a delicious meal.

After that she got prepared to get ready to go to the market to get some bread.

So off she went into her room and put some cozy warm clothes to go with the beautiful spring weather.

Finally she goes downstairs to say goodbye to grandma before she goes. “Goodbye grandma” “okay honey bye” grandma replies.

So off she went skipping down the forest beginning to see the wonderful market up ahead.

As she wanders around she ends up finding a lonely friendly wolf laying there on the side of the road. Ran went Red, she carefully patted it and went to the shop to buy some food and give it to the wolf.

Then the dog started to feel better and became one with Red. so together Red and the dog went to the bakery to buy some bread. After that Red decided to keep the dog and name it poffy.

Next they had been ready to head home but Red suddenly forgot which one was the path to go home so Red yelped for help to find her way home but no one heard her.

But then poffy came in handy Red never knew he was a good finder so he smelt his way back home. So off went Red and Poffy going home suddenly Poffy picked up a smell that was like soup so the closer they got the smell got stronger they couldn't smell their way back home.

Red was so pleased to have poffy when they got home and told how amazing poffy were to find there way back home to grandma. Red served up some soup for poffy for his lovely help.

The end.

Petero:

1 comment:

  1. Hi Petero,

    What a lovely narrative. You have used some really grea descriptive words to describe the characters in the story and the setting of the story. I like how you have completely changed the story of Little Red Riding Hood, I think I prefer this version. What made you decide to make the wolf friendly in this version? Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read you story about Goldilocks and the Three Bears.

    Miss Parrant

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