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Wednesday 29 April 2020

My own Mystery story

Write your own Mystery storyhttps://cdn.pixabay.com/photo/2014/04/03/10/54/detective-311684_960_720.png

1. Pick one of the three mystery scenarios:
Scenario 1
Scenario 2
Scenario 3
Santa comes home to find that somebody has smashed up his workshop.


Clues
Cookie crumbs
Reindeer hoof prints
Broken window
An elf hat

Suspects
Rudolf
Mrs Claus
Jones - Head elf
Santa Claus
Mr Burt discovers that someone has drunk all the coffee in the entire staffroom.


Clues
Mr Goodwin's favourite mug
Mr Somerville’s jumper
Miss Tuia’s Keys
A squashed banana

Suspects
Mr Goodwin
Mr Somerville
Miss Tuia
Mrs Sio
Old McDonald came back to his farm to discover that someone (or something) had broken his barn door.

Clues
Chicken feathers
Sheep Poo
An old ladies shoe
A dog’s bone

Suspects
Chicken
Sheep
Mrs McDonald
Dog

2. After picking your scenario, write your own mystery story. 
> In your story you are the detective that’s been called in to help

Length
Bronze medal 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraph
Start writing below:


It was just a normal ordinary day until a tragedy occurred. Coffee!!
It was a day with all the teachers at school just teaching the kids learning like normal. But there was a problem in the staff.

As all the teachers are looking after the kids as there are doing their work the bell rings (ring ring!!). 
“Okay kids time to pack up lunch time” says the teachers.
So after the class is packed the kids have got there lunch and started eating.

Soon as they have eaten one by one each student leaves.
When each student has got their shoes or slides and exits through the door. The teachers make their way through to the staff for their lunch.

So as the teachers are walking they have approached together and ended up walking together to the staff. Well they are walking. They are talking about their class (kids) and their daily life. Finally they make it to the staff and enjoy their lunch.

But suddenly the principal had turned up with a not so happy face he wondered and said “who had finished all the coffee”. All the teachers sat there with a face that said “it wasn’t me”. So the principal Mr burt was so confused so he called an investigator to find out who it was.

So Mr Burt called and said “ I need you to come plz “.
A few mins later the investigator comes and searches the place and the clues he got were. 
A squashed banana, Miss Tuias keys, Mr Somerville’s jumper and Mr Goodwin's fav mug. Right there he already spotted the solution! It was the mug!.

Right there he had said to Mr Burt that “it was that filthy drinking all the coffee guy right there!” “huh!” Mr Burt shouted.  “ Mr Goodwin why?” Mr Goodwin just sat there with embarrassment he said underneath his breath “dang it” but Mr Burt wasn’t mad at all he was so chill he made another jug of coffee for everyone………..

       

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