Kia ora Petero, Your drawing of the rocket ship is very good and I like all the colours that you have added to it. you could add a drawing of yourself as an astronaut to make it more detailed. It would be awesome to see the whole world from outer space and experience zero gravity. I think it would be really cool to go to mars. What planet do you want to go to?
Hi Petero, I like how you want to be an astronaut. I also like your drawing of a rocketship. It looks awesome and the colourful details. But maybe next time you can proofread your sentence so we can understand it more . From Cora
I want `to be astronaut because I want to see the hole world from the out side, and so I can see the moon and what it feels like without no gravity. 
Kia ora Petero,
ReplyDeleteYour drawing of the rocket ship is very good and I like all the colours that you have added to it. you could add a drawing of yourself as an astronaut to make it more detailed. It would be awesome to see the whole world from outer space and experience zero gravity. I think it would be really cool to go to mars. What planet do you want to go to?
hi petero i really like your rocket ship and i like your stare
ReplyDeletesorry it was stars
ReplyDeleteHi Petero,
ReplyDeleteI like how you want to be an astronaut. I also like your drawing of a rocketship. It looks awesome and the colourful details.
But maybe next time you can proofread your sentence so we can understand it more .
From Cora