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Monday 20 April 2020

Goldilocks and the tree bears: make sure to read till the end.

Once upon a time there was a young girl called Goldilocks. She was just a little girl that lived in the forest with her parents. Every day she always wants to go out into the forest but she wasn’t allowed to go anywhere.

So one day she decided to sneak out the house and explore the forest. As she was about to sneak out she had made a ton of mess in the kitchen by spelling the milk and pouring the cereal all over the floor. As in a distraction for her mother to clean for her invitation to sneak out.

So after her mother had come to clean she made her way back to her room and climbed out the window onto the back shelter and jumped down to exit the back door. As she had made her way out she found her self walking a path to the middle of nowhere.

Meanwhile at the end of the path holds a family of bears, a mother bear, daddy bear and baby bear. On that side they are about to go for a walk down the path and back. 

So as the bear family were gone for their walk Goldilocks was still on her walk following the path. All of a sudden she sees a house. As she approaches the house she sees a window. She carefully peeks thru to take a look, when she does she spots 3 bowls of porridge.

So she quietly opened the door and there she saw it. The three bowls of porridge so she walked over and tried the first bowl but that one was too hot she tried the second one but that one was too sweet so she tried the third bowl and that one was just right.

Next she spotted some cosy chairs sitting in the living room. So she walked on over to the chairs and sat on the first one but it was too small she broke it with one touch. So she tried the second one but that one was too big and she couldn’t get comfortable so she sat on the third one and that one was just right.

After that she went to go up stairs to go for a nap so she went into a room and spotted tree beds. She tried the first one but it was too small so she tried the second one but it was just too big so she tried the third one and it was just right. So she took a nap. Then when she woke up she finally go up and left with the door closed.

Meanwhile the three bears came back home but suddenly the baby bear started to cry. He said “someone ate my porridge” “huh someone broke my chair!” 

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The three bears were so shocked they became angry but they went on with their day.

But here is how it should have gone.

Meanwhile the three bears who lived at the end of the path we're going to go for a walk so they got out of the house and locked the door and went for a walk…….



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